deadlychair - Teheboq

Player Name: deadlychair
Character Name: Teheboq (tuh-heh-Bock) "Knowledgeable Weapon"
Race: Saurus

Appearance: 7'2" when standing erect, 6'1" when in standard hunch. Exceptionally bony, even for a Saurus, what few areas where bone does not jut out or cover up are covered in uniform medium blue scales. His head is covered in a wide, almost triangular crest with smaller spikes jutting out that transitions into a row all along his back down to the tip of his barbed tail.

Equipment:
Bone Saw Sword (Hand Weapon) - 3-6 damage.
Heavy Bone Armor - 2 Armor
Bone Shield - 5% block chance
Weak Amulet of Protection - 2% ward save
2 Gold

Story: Teheboq was spawned, like all his fellow Saurus, deep within the caverns beneath the Saurus barracks in the temple of Hexoatl. Unlike his brothers, Teheboq was born with significantly stronger and more prominent bone plates covering his body. Already marked apart from his brothers by his durable exterior, Teheboq demonstrated a keen intellect (by Saurus standards) and a notable gift for learning languages. Skink priests and scribes scrambled to find some ancient quote that would have predicted such as a creature as Teheboq, but where unable to find anything that could match for twenty years. During these twenty years Teheboq grew as an average Saurus, he fought alongside his brothers defending the temple from would-be thieves and out-of-control dinosaurs. These encounters sated the bloodlust in his Saurus veins, but Teheboq often grew restless waiting for his next battle. In these times of restlessness Teheboq often journeyed into the Skink barrios, here he learned how to treat wounds and to apply poisons to his blades as the Skink applied them to their darts.

Finally Skink priests discovered a tablet with these words spoken by a now dead Slann inscribed upon it, "Alone The Weapon of Knowledge shall rend the shadow of the cursed capitol." Thus Teheboq, stripped of his weapons and armor as the priests believed to be required, was given directions to the ruined temple Irolek and sent forth on his sacred mission. For many days Teheboq traveled the coast of Lustria, hoping to discover some ship or port where he could gain passage to Irolek. As he traveled Teheboq encountered many wild beasts, and those that he could not soothe or terrify he slew. From the bones of those he slew, Teheboq fashioned arms and armor as he had seen the Skink artisans do in his youth. Finally, after weeks of searching, Teheboq stumbled upon a ship bound for Irolek. Using items he had fashioned from leftover bones, Teheboq was able to barter for passage to the island. Though the ship and all her crew were destroyed in a sudden squall, Teheboq's enhanced fortitude allowed him to survive and when the storm cleared the island of Irolek was plainly visible. Upon reaching the island Teheboq searched for the largest gathering of people so that he might ask around for the location of the Oldblood Sarkitek whom Teheboq knew to be on the island. And so Teheboq found himself, a lone Saurus walking into a bar...

Statistics-
Ws: 15
Bs: 10
S: 10
T: 25
A: 15
Wp: 10
W: 25

Skill Trees
Path of the Apothecary
Weakness Poison - Rank 1 - Lowers the enemy's Strength and Weapon skill by 1 for 3 rounds.

Antidote - Rank 1 - Lowers the duration of any poison by 2 rounds. In addition the first time you use this ability on a target in a fight it heals them 1 wound.

Path of the Guardian
Tough as Nails - Rank 2 - Gain 5 additional T for each enemy in the same zone beyond the first. (Max 3 additional enemy)

Juggernaut - Rank 2 - Cannot take over 50% of maximum hp on any single hit.

Adrenaline Rush - Rank 1 - Passively Regenerate 1W each round when in the same range as an enemy.

Blessed Child of the Old Ones
Blessing of Quetzl - Rank 2 - Grants a 2 armor bonus against the first attack each round and grants a passive 100% immunity to critical hits.

Jungle Predator - Rank 1 - You gain +10 on any wounding rolls against non-sentient beasts and enemies such as beasts, mobs, and monsters.

Kills - 3: Mad Pirate, Spear Goblinx2

Admin stamp of approval. Backstory sounds solid. Stats and Skill points equal out. Only thing you should change is I edited the starting skills to 8 instead of 7. So enjoy your free skill point =D. Once you add your skill point I'll toss this in the approved players list.

The next step you need to make is start a training thread. You can see my post as an example. Also feel free to sign up for the alpha adventure if you haven't already. Thanks for posting!

Initial Statistics-
Ws: 15
Bs: 10
S: 10
T: 25
A: 15
Wp: 10
W: 25

Current Statistics-
Ws: 25
Bs: 15
S: 20
T: 30
A: 15
Wp: 15
W: 33

Skill Trees
Path of the Guardian

Titan- 3 Ranks
Requirements: None
Type: Passive
Effect: You cannot take over 66/50/33% of your maximum hp on any single hit. Any damage that deals more than this amount deals this amount instead.

Adrenaline Rush - 1 Rank
Requirements: Titan
Type: Passive
Effect: Regenerate 1W each time you engage an enemy.

Large Target - 2 Ranks
Requirements: None
Type: Passive
Effect: Any foe attempted to use a ranged attack or spell against an ally without the Large Target ability, while you are in between or in the allies zone suffers -5/10 to hit and cast. (Needs rewording but you get the idea)

Tough as Nails- 2 Ranks
Requirements: None
Type: Passive
Effect: Gain 3/5 additional T for each enemy either engaging you or being engaged by you, beyond the first. (Max 5 stacks)

Guard - 1 Rank
Requirements: None
Type: Passive
Effect: Grants a 1/3/5% block chance.

Path of the Assassin

Black Lotus - 3 Ranks
Requirements: None
Type: Poison
Effect:When you apply this poison to a weapon choose 2 of the following stats (Ws, Bs, S, Ag). Each application lowers the targets chosen stats by 1/3/5 for 3 rounds. This stacks up to 5 times.

Reserve Vial - 1 Rank
Requirements: One poison
Type: Powerful Free Ability
Effect: You swiftly pour a hidden vial of poison over one of your weapons, changing its poison to a new type of your choice (that you know).

(removed the 2 toughness gained from the plague adventure and replaced it with the 1 skill point like you were talking about before.)

Looks good. Only minor thing is that your W cannot be higher than your 2nd highest stat which atm is WS. Currently they are you highest stat. Other than that you're good to go.

Right, I'm retarded.

Initial Statistics-
Ws: 15
Bs: 10
S: 10
T: 25
A: 15
Wp: 10
W: 25

Current Statistics-
Ws: 30
Bs: 15
S: 20
T: 30
A: 15
Wp: 15
W: 28

Approved get in the fight. I'm gonna give forte a couple more hours to post then I'll have ze pirates attack.

Player Name: deadlychair
Character Name: Teheboq (tuh-heh-Bock) "Knowledgeable Weapon"
Race: Saurus

Appearance: 7'2" when standing erect, 6'1" when in standard hunch. Exceptionally bony, even for a Saurus, what few areas where bone does not jut out or cover up are covered in uniform medium blue scales. His head is covered in a wide, almost triangular crest with smaller spikes jutting out that transitions into a row all along his back down to the tip of his barbed tail.

Story: Teheboq was spawned, like all his fellow Saurus, deep within the caverns beneath the Saurus barracks in the temple of Hexoatl. Unlike his brothers, Teheboq was born with significantly stronger and more prominent bone plates covering his body. Already marked apart from his brothers by his durable exterior, Teheboq demonstrated a keen intellect (by Saurus standards) and a notable gift for learning languages. Skink priests and scribes scrambled to find some ancient quote that would have predicted such as a creature as Teheboq, but where unable to find anything that could match for twenty years. During these twenty years Teheboq grew as an average Saurus, he fought alongside his brothers defending the temple from would-be thieves and out-of-control dinosaurs. These encounters sated the bloodlust in his Saurus veins, but Teheboq often grew restless waiting for his next battle. In these times of restlessness Teheboq often journeyed into the Skink barrios, here he learned how to treat wounds and to apply poisons to his blades as the Skink applied them to their darts.

Finally Skink priests discovered a tablet with these words spoken by a now dead Slann inscribed upon it, "Alone The Weapon of Knowledge shall rend the shadow of the cursed capitol." Thus Teheboq, stripped of his weapons and armor as the priests believed to be required, was given directions to the ruined temple Irolek and sent forth on his sacred mission. For many days Teheboq traveled the coast of Lustria, hoping to discover some ship or port where he could gain passage to Irolek. As he traveled Teheboq encountered many wild beasts, and those that he could not soothe or terrify he slew. From the bones of those he slew, Teheboq fashioned arms and armor as he had seen the Skink artisans do in his youth. Finally, after weeks of searching, Teheboq stumbled upon a ship bound for Irolek. Using items he had fashioned from leftover bones, Teheboq was able to barter for passage to the island. Though the ship and all her crew were destroyed in a sudden squall, Teheboq's enhanced fortitude allowed him to survive and when the storm cleared the island of Irolek was plainly visible. Upon reaching the island Teheboq searched for the largest gathering of people so that he might ask around for the location of the Oldblood Sarkitek whom Teheboq knew to be on the island. And so Teheboq found himself, a lone Saurus walking into a bar...

Initial Statistics-
Ws: 15
Bs: 10
S: 10
T: 25
Ag: 15
Wp: 10
W: 25

Current Statistics-
Ws: 30
Bs: 15
S: 20
T: 31
Ag: 15
Wp: 15
W: 30

Equipment:
Bone Spear (Hand Weapon) - 3-6 damage.
Heavy Bone Armor - 2 Armor
Bone Shield - 5% block chance
Dented Cannonball - Heavy Throwing Weapon - 3-10 damage. Armor Piercing. +10 to wound. One-Shot. Shoot and Move.
Weak Amulet of Protection - 2% Ward Save.

Gold: 0
Path of the Guardian
Titan- Rank 3/3
Requirements: None
Type: Passive
Effect: You cannot take over 33%(9) of your maximum hp on any single hit. Any damage that deals more than this amount deals this amount instead.

Adrenaline Rush - Rank 1/1
Requirements: Titan
Type: Passive
Effect: Regenerate 1W each time you engage an enemy.

Large Target - Rank 1/2
Requirements: None
Type: Passive
Effect: Any foe attempted to use a ranged attack or spell against an ally without the Large Target ability, while you are in between or in the allies zone suffers -5 to hit and cast. (Needs rewording but you get the idea)

Path of the Commander
Summon Minion - Rank 3/3
Requirements: None
Type: Powerful Summon Ability
Effect: Summons a minion with 10 in all base stats and 5 in W. This minion deals 2-5 damage in melee. Minions also gain an additional 10% of all your statistics when summoned.

Bodyguard - Rank 2/2
Requirements: Summon Minion
Type: Passive
Effect: Your summon minion gains an additional +20% of your T and W (total of 30%) and a 10% block chance and 2 armor. All other minions you control gain +5 T and 2W.

Minion Stats -
Ws: 13
Bs: 11
S: 12
T: 19
Ag: 11
Wp: 11
W: 14

10% Block Chance
2 Armor
2-5 damage melee attack

Path of the Assassin
Black Lotus - Rank 3/3
Requirements: None
Type: Poison
Effect:When you apply this poison to a weapon choose 2 of the following stats (Ws, Bs, S, Ag). Each application lowers the targets chosen stats by 5 for 3 rounds. This stacks up to 5 times.

Killer Instinct - Rank 1/3
Requirements: None
Type: Passive
Effect: You gain a 1% critical strike chance with all weapons.

*Resubmitting with new commander abilities as we discussed. Minion fluff will be written after approval in my next training post.*

Reapproved. Looks good. I'll update it. Feel free to begin training and jump into a solo quest.